Please rate my mirror image poem: This is only part there is still like 7 lines left but not enough

Blue eyes sparkling in the sun

They Shine as if they are a gateway to heaven

Seeing through you until they rest upon the truth

They are confused but at the same time they know everything

When you gaze into them it is like walking by the beach, not wanting to turn back because of the beauty

Medium length, sun-yeloow hair

Not to short but not to long, it is the perfect length

It worked great when she was a hippy last year for Halloween

Brilliantly reflecting the sun with every movement she makes

So flawless and amazing, it's a wonder how god made it so

She has a smile so amazing, it could boastfully brighten anyone's day,Teeth that are straight so there is no need for bracesIt's hidden ability is to make me melt

Understanding and comfortig are its best qualities

You can tell it's hiding something and the question is, what?

A round face with a few freckeles

Always smiling when with friends

Only a mystery when she's trying to remember what came to thought and disapeared

Please rate my mirror image poem: This is only part there is still like 7 lines left but not enough room?

Hm. The poem has good intentions, it's just really wordy. Try and cut back your words, describe it minimally.

Let the reader try and fill in a few blanks and leave the poem up for interpretation.

Please rate my mirror image poem: This is only part there is still like 7 lines left but not enough room?

Can you people read?!?!?!?

THIS IS NOT THE POETRY SECTION, IT';S NOT THAT HARD TO FIGURE OUT!!!!!